Fixes and tests for ICMP quoted packets checksum update - #1791
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In `@net/src/headers/embedded.rs`:
- Around line 643-645: Update the EmbeddedTransport::Udp handling so RFC 1624
checksum adjustment is skipped when the embedded IPv4 UDP checksum field is
zero, preserving the disabled-checksum sentinel; apply this rule only for IPv4
and retain checksum updates for valid checksums and other IP versions.
In `@net/src/icmp4/mod.rs`:
- Line 1324: Use RFC 4884 byte alignment for quoted datagrams: update the
padding calculation in net/src/icmp4/mod.rs:1324-1324 to next_multiple_of(4) and
net/src/icmp6/mod.rs:1375-1375 to next_multiple_of(8). Also update
EmbeddedHeaders::check_full_payload to accept lengths that are multiples of 4/8
and require padding shorter than 4/8 bytes for IPv4/IPv6 respectively.
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There are correctness issues in newly added/updated logic and tests (notably RFC padding boundary usage in tests and UDP/IPv4 zero-checksum semantics during address-translation checksum updates) that should be addressed before approval.
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Pull request overview
This PR improves handling of ICMPv4/ICMPv6 error messages that quote an inner IP packet, focusing on more accurate embedded-payload detection and correct/incremental checksum handling during NAT translation, with expanded tests to validate these behaviors.
Changes:
- Fix embedded-payload parsing for ICMP error messages (better separation of ICMP header vs payload when deciding quoted-packet length).
- Refactor checksum incremental update API to support in-place updates and avoid no-op updates that can change checksum “zero” representations.
- Add property-based tests for detecting full vs truncated embedded payloads, and expand NAT translation tests to validate checksum updates.
File summaries
| File | Description |
|---|---|
| net/src/icmp6/mod.rs | Adjust ICMPv6 embedded payload parsing and add tests around embedded payload completeness. |
| net/src/icmp4/mod.rs | Adjust ICMPv4 embedded payload parsing and add tests around embedded payload completeness. |
| net/src/headers/mod.rs | Update checksum-increment test usage to match in-place API. |
| net/src/headers/embedded.rs | Update embedded transport checksum update helpers to use new in-place checksum API and skip no-op updates. |
| net/src/checksum.rs | Introduce pure incremental_checksum helper and make incremental updates apply in-place with error handling. |
| nat/src/icmp_handler/icmp_error_msg.rs | Update NAT translation for ICMP inner packets to also update inner transport checksum when inner IP addresses change; extend tests to validate checksum behavior. |
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nat/src/icmp_handler/icmp_error_msg.rs:146
- Same concern as in source translation: for UDP/IPv4, a zero checksum (0x0000) commonly means "no checksum"; incrementally updating it during address translation changes semantics and likely creates an invalid checksum. Consider skipping the update when the embedded transport is UDP with checksum 0 on IPv4.
// See the comment on the source address translation: update the checksum of the inner
// transport header to account for the new address in the pseudo-header.
if let Some(transport) = embedded_headers.try_embedded_transport_mut() {
transport.update_checksum_for_address(old_addr, target_addr);
}
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When parsing an ICMP Error message, we determine whether the embedded IP packet fragment carries the full payload of the original packet, so that consumers know whether they can recompute the checksum of the embedded transport header from scratch. But we had two bugs in the full-payload detection, leading to false negatives: - Method check_full_payload() compares the length of the ICMP payload with the total length of the original IP packet, but we pass the number of bytes left in the cursor _after the embedded headers are consumed_, so the length of these headers is counted twice. Save the length before consuming the headers instead. - The length of the "original datagram" field is stored in the ICMP header (RFC 4884), and payload_length() retrieves it at a fixed offset in the buffer that it receives. But this buffer starts with the Ethernet header, not the ICMP header. Pass the buffer at the offset for the ICMP header instead. Fixes: 859192a ("feat(net): Check whether ICMP embedded packet is full") Co-authored-by: Claude Opus 5 <noreply@anthropic.com> Signed-off-by: Quentin Monnet <qmo@qmon.net>
The Bolero generator for the headers embedded in ICMPv6 Error messages sets the next header of the inner IPv6 header to ICMP, when it generates an embedded ICMPv6 header. As a consequence, we never parse the embedded header back as ICMPv6, and the fuzz tests relying on this generator don't cover embedded ICMPv6 headers at all. Use ICMPv6 instead. Fixes: f9652c5 ("feat(net): Support ICMP-in-ICMP") Co-authored-by: Claude Opus 5 <noreply@anthropic.com> Signed-off-by: Quentin Monnet <qmo@qmon.net>
The implementation of the increment_update_checksum() method hesitated between in-place checksum update (it takes a "&mut self" but doesn't use it) and returning the updated checksum. This led to bugs in calling functions, which assumed in-place update and discarded the result instead of updating the packet header with the new checksum. We recently fixed one of these functions (update_checksum() for EmbeddedTransport), but increment_update_checksum_32bit() and translate_inner_icmp() are still broken. Let's fix this by making increment_update_checksum() update in-place, so that no caller risks discarding the updated checksum. Fixes: f181232 ("fix(net): Store incremental checksum updates") Fixes: 89446b7 ("feat(nat): Translate inner ICMP Echo header for ICMP Error messages") Fixes: 45ed7b0 ("feat(net): Implement checksum handling for EmbeddedTransport") Fixes: 6ed51bc ("feat(net): Implement incremental checksum update") Signed-off-by: Quentin Monnet <qmo@qmon.net>
In the NAT code, when translating the headers for an embedded packet fragment within an ICMP Error message, we update the checksum when translating the TCP/UDP ports or ICMP identifier; but we somehow omitted to update the checksum when translating the inner IP addresses, even though they're part of the pseudo-header considered for the TCP/UDP/ICMPv6 (but not ICMPv4) checksum! Let's update the checksum when the addresses change. Fixes: fab39ef ("feat(nat): Translate ICMP Error messages' inner IP packet") Co-authored-by: Claude Opus 5 <noreply@anthropic.com> Signed-off-by: Quentin Monnet <qmo@qmon.net>
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net/src/icmp6/mod.rs (1)
625-630: 🎯 Functional Correctness | 🟠 Major | ⚡ Quick winExclude
Icmp6Type::ParamProblemfrom extension support.
payload_lengthreads the fifth octet as an RFC 4884 length attribute. For ICMPv6 Parameter Problem, that octet is the high byte of the pointer field. A nonzero pointer can create a false quoted-packet boundary and cause incorrect full-payload detection.RFC 4884 defines ICMPv6 extensions only for Destination Unreachable and Time Exceeded. (rfc-editor.org)
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- Icmp6Type::DestUnreachable(_) | Icmp6Type::TimeExceeded(_) | Icmp6Type::ParamProblem(_) + Icmp6Type::DestUnreachable(_) | Icmp6Type::TimeExceeded(_)Add a regression test with
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In `@net/src/icmp6/mod.rs`:
- Around line 625-630: Update supports_extensions to return true only for
Icmp6Type::DestUnreachable and Icmp6Type::TimeExceeded, excluding
Icmp6Type::ParamProblem. Add a regression test covering a Parameter Problem
message with a nonzero pointer high byte and verify it is not treated as
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Add checksum validation to the bolero tests for ICMP inner packet translation. Also add tests to validate the behaviour of checksum's incremental update: in particular, validate that we never update the checksum when the value does not change, or it might result on a different value (0x0000 instead of 0xffff for 1's complement), possibly associated to the "no checksum" value for UDP. Co-authored-by: Claude Opus 5 <noreply@anthropic.com> Signed-off-by: Quentin Monnet <qmo@qmon.net>
The padded "original datagram" field of an ICMP Error message is aligned on 32 bits for ICMPv4 and on 64 bits for ICMPv6, not on 32 and 64 bytes: we reject valid fields, a 132-byte one for instance. We also ignore the 128-byte minimum that RFC 4884 mandates for the field, so we'd reject the padding that an inner packet shorter than 128 bytes requires. Let's account for the padding length properly. Link: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/rfc4884 Fixes: 859192a ("feat(net): Check whether ICMP embedded packet is full") Co-authored-by: Claude Opus 5 <noreply@anthropic.com> Signed-off-by: Quentin Monnet <qmo@qmon.net>
The generator never sets the optional length attribute of the ICMP header: it writes it at the length of the headers that follow the outer IP header, instead of at the offset of the ICMP header. It also pads the "original datagram" field up to 128 octets of transport payload, where RFC 4884 counts the octets of the whole inner packet. Fixes: 7bbad08 ("test(net): Add a Bolero generator for a full ICMP Error message packet") Co-authored-by: Claude Opus 5 <noreply@anthropic.com> Signed-off-by: Quentin Monnet <qmo@qmon.net>
Storing the incremental update made these writes real for the first time, and with them the write-side rules the old no-op never had to obey. A UDP datagram over IPv4 may carry a zero checksum to say the sender computed none. There is no sum there to fold a delta into, so translating a port or an address of such a quote turned the marker into a checksum for a sum nobody took. Zero is spoken for on the other side too: over IPv6 the field is mandatory, so a fold that lands on zero goes out as the other spelling instead. Which rule applies depends on the IP version of the packet the header was quoted from, which `EmbeddedTransport` cannot see, hence the new argument. Link: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/rfc768 Co-authored-by: Claude Opus 5 (1M context) <noreply@anthropic.com> Signed-off-by: Daniel Noland <daniel@githedgehog.com> Co-authored-by: Quentin Monnet <qmo@qmon.net> Signed-off-by: Quentin Monnet <qmo@qmon.net>
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This was meant to be a simple follow-up for #1752 (comment), but one bug leading Claude to spot another, this now contains a bunch of fixes for ICMP Error messages' inner packets payload detection and checksum validation.